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AloisXReader- My Angel Chapter 1

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The young boy ran and ran, behind him the baker threw rocks at his direction, punishment for trying to steal his buns. Running at his heels with him was his brother, who was not related to him by any means, but they had grown so close they now refer to eachother as brothers. As they turned a corner, the boy who was ahead bumped into someone and fell to the ground.

"Oh my, are you alright?" a voice asked. The boy looked up, before him was a girl who looked to be about his age, with (h/c) hair and bright (e/c) eyes that shone with innocence and goodness, and all she wore was a ragged, plain dress. He asked, "Who are you?"

"Me? My name is (name). What's your's?"

"I'm Jim," he pointed to the boy behind him, "this is my brother Luka." (name) smiled, "It's a pleasure to meet you," she said, doing a slight curtsey, "what are you boys doing?" Before Jim could answer, an angry voice shouted, "There you are!!! I'll teach you a good lesson!!" It was the baker. (name) was able to grasp Jims and Luka's situation, she grabbed a stone and hurled it at the baker, hitting him right in the forehead, causing him to fall. Then she grabbed Jim's hand, making him blush slightly.

"Follow me!" she shouted, pulling Jim while he took Luka's hand and pulled him along. They ran through alleys until they lost the baker and ended up in the outskirts of the village. Stopping near a river, they all collapsed in the grass, tired from all the running they did. Jim was the first to recover, he walked over to (name) and looked down at her face and asked, "Why did you help my brother and I back there?" She smiled up at him and answered, "Because you guys and me are the same."

"Huh?"

"I'm also on my own."

"Oh really?"
"Yes. A year ago, my parents caught a terrible sickness, when I went into the village for some help, no one even glanced at me. The sickness took its' toll on my mother and father, and they passed away. Ever since then, I've been on my own." Jim looked at (name) with sadness in his eyes, unlike her, he had someone like Luka to keep him from being alone. Yet here this girl was, managed an entire year by herself. Sitting next to her, he said, "Hey (name)?" She sat herself up, "Yes?"

"Do you . . . want to join Luka and I and be our sister?" (name)'s eyes grew wide with disbelief.

"R-really?"

"Yeah, we would like that, wouldn't we Luka?" Jim asked, turning to Luka.

"Oh yea! It would be great to have a sister around!" Tears of happiness filled (name)'s eyes.

"Y-yes! I would like that very much!" she cried, lunging herself at Jim and Luka, tackling them to the ground, then placing a little kiss on both their cheeks, making them go red in the face, but they smiled and wrapped their arms forming a group hug.

With (name) around, things got more exciting and lively for Jim and Luka. They played more games together, stole greater amounts of food and money, shared stories, and (name) would sing songs to the boys while they sat around in the grass and before they went to sleep.

One day, the trio managed to steal a large bag from an elderly and looked into it when they reached the old shack they used as their home.

"Cripes, there's not much here," Jim said as he went through the bag's contents. (name) then noticed a jar of a substance in the bag, it almost looked like medicine. She reached and took it from the bag.

"Brother, do you think this is medicine?" she asked, feeling a little guilty.
"Chuck it," Jim ordered as he continued to rummage through the bag.

"I wonder if he'll be ok without it," Luka said, taking the medicine from (name), almost feeling as guilty as she did, "I mean, do you think he's gonna die?"

"Neh, I doubt it, besides," he added with a smile, "what do we care if he does? He's a stupid old man!" Jim looked up to (name) and Luka, his smile turned into a frown when he noticed something on Luka's forehead. He reached out and pulled Luka's bangs out of the way, revealing a large bruise.

"What happened?" he asked. Luka responded with an embarrassed smile, "It was the baker, he threw a stone at me."

"Only because he was protecting me," (name) said, "I was trying to get some rolls for our breakfast, but then the baker found me and threw the stones at me, but Luka shielded me from getting hurt."
Jim glared, stood up with his hand curved into a fist and shouted, "That bloody sod!!"

"I'm ok," Luka reassured. Jim looked down at him and snatched the medicine out of his hands angrily, he threw it at the ground, trying to get rid of some of his anger. (name) and Luka watched at the green substance splattered all over the ground and Jim panting. He began to speak after a few deep breaths, "It's not just him, it's all of them . . . they can," he suddenly lifted his head with a mad smile on his face as he spoke, "they can all just drop dead! As soon as our parents died everyone treated us as nuisances. I wish they'd die. Every last one of them," Jim said happily. Luka and (name) came up behind him and hugged him.

"I'm sure your wish will come true brother," Luka said.

"Huh?" Jim said, looking at the two with a puzzled look on his face.

"I know it will! It's gotta!" (name) exclaimed, "after all you can eat three kidney pies at a time, and run faster then spring hill Jack!!" she playfully ran around the room while shouting, "Run run run run run aaaand," she jumped on a crate, "jump!!" she marched happily in place, "yeah you can terrific stuff so you'll get a lot of terrific wishes!!" Luka smiled and joined her on the crate.

"She's right brother! You'll surely get your wish!!" Jim couldn't help but to smile at the two.

"Listen," Luka and (name) stopped marching and obeyed, "Luka, (name), you have to stick with me always from now on. If anyone dares throw a stone at you guys, I'll throw a pile of horse manure at them! Understood?" Luka and (name) hopped off the crate and surprised Jim by getting on one knee and bowing before him like you wold to a king and said, "Yes, your highness," in unison. They looked up at him and smiled, causing Jim to smile back. He looked at (name).

"(name)?"

"Yes your highness?" she asked, giggling.

"I'm in the mood for one of your songs, would you please sing to me that one song, what was it called . . . .?" he went into deep thought for a moment, "oh! That's right! It's that one you call 'The Slightly Chipped Full Moon'!"

"Oh! I lke that one too!" Luka said, "please sing it for us (name)!"

"Huh!? That one!? But I'm horrible at it! It's so very hard for me to hit the high notes, only my mother was able to do that, and I'm not her." Jim leaned over and placed a small kiss on (name)'s cheek, making her blush.

"Please?" he asked, making the cutest face ever.

"Oh . . . ok, but don't blame me if your ears break!" Jim and Luka took a seat on the ground while (name) quickly tuned her voice and began to sing:

"The full moon slightly chipped

That's so me

So please

Save me and hold me tight

Just make me all right

Under the dark clouds

Wingless swans in my soul

From the fortress, a pessimist



My howl in the night,

To the isolated star

Don't drive me crazy

Everything seems too far

The sky so deep

Spread endlessly


How on earth can I get to the strawberry field?



The full moon slightly chipped

Uncertain
, oh please

Save me and let me smile

Just make me all right

Over the bed of trees

My heart spins around


My howl in the dawn

To the isolated star

I dare to forgive you

Everything seems too far

But care for me tenderly


How on earth can I get to the strawberry field?"

Jim and Luka gave (name) a huge round of applause.

"That was excellent (name)!" Luka praised.

"Y-you two think so?" (name) asked.

"Yes, you have such a beautiful voice," Jim said, getting up and walking to (name)'s side, "heck, when you sing, you could be mistaken for an angel." (name) blushed madly from the compliment.

"Oh Jim, you're too kind."

"Heh."

One night, while Jim, (name), and Luka went to the river to fetch water, the boys heard (name) suddenly scream.

"What's wrong (name)!" Jim asked, holding her close to him, trying to calm her down. She pointed into the river, there was a man in the river face down, his body was covered with burn marks and wounds. He appeared dead.

"Look!" Luka shouted. Up the river, there were more villagers in the river in the same condition as the man (name) saw.

"What happened here?" Jim asked no one in particular. He looked up the river to the village. He saw the entire village engulfed in red flames. Taking Luka's and (name)'s hand, he ran towards the village. There, they saw the gruesome sight of the villagers sprawled on the ground and the buildings on fire, that was slowly starting to die down.

"They're all dead," Jim said in awe, squeezing Lukas and (name)'s hand.

"But how?" Luka asked, looking up to Jim.

"That old man with the medicine, that sodding baker who threw stones at you and (name)."

"And that lady who used to throw rubbish at our house, Ms Lyla," Luka said.

"And that rotten git who'd always spit on us," Jim let out a little chuckle.

"And the shoe shiner who's brag about his sweet things too?" (name) asked, starting to smile. Jim raised his arm and did a 'peace' sign with his finger.

"All the bloody gits who were so nasty to us are dead now, every last one of them! Dead!" he proclaimed happily. Luka and (name) did the same thing with their fingers, laughing along with Jim.

"Everyone, everything is all gone!!" Jim cheered.

"Gone!" Luka agreed. The trio laughed some more and ran around in a circle waving their arms around like they would always do when having fun. Jim sighed happily and allowed himself to fall backwards on the ground. Luka and (name) went on their knees next to him.

"Come on," Jim said, after catching his breath, "with them out of the way all their stuff belongs to us now!" Luka and (name) nodded and watched as Jim waved his arms around some more and laughed. The trio split up and looted whatever they could fine that was not destroyed by the fire. At his last stop, Jim ripped a costly, pearl necklace form an old lady.

"Pearls don't suit you old lady! You ever look in a mirror?" he taunted to the corpse, "but you know, they would look wonderful on my precious (name), yeah, they would look so much better on her! She will look like the angel she's supposed to be with these, so thank you for dying!" All of a sudden, jim felt a cold breeze shoot past him, he shivered, but it went as soon as it came.

"Luka! (name)! It's time to go home!" He waited and only (name) came to him, with a small bag of loot in her hands.

"(name), where's Luka?"

"I thought he would be here before me."

"Let's get back to the house, maybe he left before us." (name) nodded and followed Jim home.

There, not to far from their house, was Luka, lying on the ground on his stomach.

"Luka!" Jim shouted, running ahead of (name), "there you are!" Jim knelt by his side, "I was calling you." He rolled Luka over and pulled him into his arms. But then he frowned, noticing that the boy's once shining eyes were now dull and blank. He forced a smile and said, "Come on, wake up. What's wrong with you?" (name) had caught up and waved her hand in front of Luka's face.

"Jim . . . he's not responding!" she said, tears forming in her eyes.

"No," Jim breathed, "no," he couldn't hold it in, he began to sob uncontrollably, "please no!" (name) threw herself at the boys, hugging the dead boy tightly, "Don't leave us!!" she screamed, "please don't!!!"

Jim and (name) were forced to move on without Luka. (name) broke down and cried for many nights. Jim wrapped his arms around her.

"(name), please, I know it's hard, but we must move on. Luka would've wanted it."

"B-But Jim . . ."

"Look at me." (name) did as she was told, "I know, I loved our little brother, but he wouldn't want us grieving like this all the time. We must continue forward, understand?" (name) wiped away her tears and tried her best to smile, "Y-yes, your highness." Jim kissed her on the cheek.

"Good. And now I promise to never leave your side. I'll always be here for you, because (name)," he leaned over and placed a gentle kiss on (name)'s lips, making both him and her become redder then tomatoes, "I-I lo-love you."

"I . . . love you too," (name) snuggled into Jim's chest.

"Someday, we'll live in a much better place," Jim said, holding (name) close, "where we have servants that follow our every command, the food is exquisite, the beds soft as clouds, beautiful gardens we could use to play in and explore. We'll have it all someday (name)."

"You really think so?"
"I can feel it."

"Ok then. Whatever you say."

Sadly, Jim could never hold on to his promise one fated day when a cart with young boys pulled up. The men grabbed for him, trying to remove him from (name).

"JIM!!" she screamed, tying to reach for him despite the men pulling at her and throwing her to the ground, "you promised!! You promised you would never leave me!!" she screamed, tears streaming down her face.

"(NAME)!! I'm sorry, but I now make a new promise!! I'll find you somehow, and we'll live together happily! This I promise on my life!!" Jim's words gave a little light of hope on (name) as she was forced to watch the cart pull away with her beloved on board. Despite her condition, she shouted, "I'll be waiting Jim!!" and that's when she passed out from exhaustion, Jim's face being the last thing she saw.
i didn't see an AloisXreader fanfic, so i thought to myself, "why not?" and this is what i came up with. It's my first time writing fanfics like this, so please be gentle with comments. if i feel motivated enough, ill continue to add more chapters (so help me with feeling motivated ^^)
enjoy!

Chapter 2: fav.me/d5c6ltu
Final Chapter: browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&global=1&q=aloisXreader#/d5f8meq

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Omg o0o Everything in my imagination has come true omg *Clicks part 2*